It is very dark and touches on some heavily brutal and strange themes.
However... Knowing the boys history I can understand it completely, what happens between them and am aware, professionally, where similar things have gone on and continue to go on. I would totally have accepted this in my mind I suppose had I traced back to when they started out as lovers. However to read it takes me back a little bit.
It's good, I think a little too honest though and scary and most people will run rather than like this sort of thing and that is not to say I don't like it cos I do.
But it will freak out a lot of people this. It's very dark and touched on a very dark and taboo subject, incest is one thing... 10 and 14 and even 18 and 14 might freak readers out.
I cant see a lot of people leaving comments to this post.
However I think how you traced it back to when it began is highly realistic.
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However... Knowing the boys history I can understand it completely, what happens between them and am aware, professionally, where similar things have gone on and continue to go on. I would totally have accepted this in my mind I suppose had I traced back to when they started out as lovers. However to read it takes me back a little bit.
It's good, I think a little too honest though and scary and most people will run rather than like this sort of thing and that is not to say I don't like it cos I do.
But it will freak out a lot of people this. It's very dark and touched on a very dark and taboo subject, incest is one thing... 10 and 14 and even 18 and 14 might freak readers out.
I cant see a lot of people leaving comments to this post.
However I think how you traced it back to when it began is highly realistic.